Hello, and welcome to Fiction Friday where I share some of my writing. This week’s post is a response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Finish off Fridays #7: Shadow 03.02.17, where they provide the picture and the opening sentence and we write an additional 100-150 words to complete the story.
150 words, 1 Minute Read
Until she uploaded her day’s photos onto the computer, she never noticed the shadow in each of them.
“What the…” She trailed off, confused. Her photography expeditions she did alone for this particular reason. In each photo she saw the same shadow, behind her off to the side. She flashed to a memory with her father who had been in a hit and run a few years back and had died in the hospital.
She remembers crying by his side, being angry and sad. Her crying had woken him up and he’d said, “Don’t cry baby girl, I’ll always be with you.”
She felt herself tearing up at the memory. She stood in front of a mirror, took a picture, and uploaded it to her computer. Lo and behold, there was the shadow standing a few feet behind her. Tears fell down her face as she laughed, cherishing the shadow.
I powered through, and got some munchies. The high with this strain is very heady, and hits like a train, lasting quite long enough for me. I enjoyed listening to music while I was smoking Blue Dre…
Source: Strain Review: Blue Dream
Waitress is actually a pretty good movie, despite my early reservations about it. Keri Russell and Nathan Fillion have great chemistry together, enhancing the comedy. The movie takes surprising turns that lead you with your mouth hanging open and face scrunched up. Cheryl Hines and Adrienne Shelly play her friends, and their witty and quirky jokes are leg-slapping funny! As funny as the movie was though the ending was a let down.
On Rotten Tomatoes Waitress has a 7.3/10 rating by critics and a 3.4/5 rating from its audience. I agree with the audience and would also give Waitress a 3.4/5 rating. I recommend this movie to anyone who likes witty comedy with unsuspecting turns.